"The Atmosphere was Cool"

Thank you, Daniel V., El Monte, CA, for your review of Walmart in Los Angeles, CA. 

Went Shopping and Tried To Buy Jack Daniels and Coke Cocktail 4 pack

But When I Got to Check Out it wouldn’t Ring up The Supervisor came over and said they Couldn’t

Sell it To Me

I Asked Why Because They Had a Shelf Full on The Liquor Aisle …Didn’t Get a Reason Was Just Told

The Atmosphere was Cool until They Refused To Sell Something in Their Store

If Walmart Doesn’t Want to Sell Something DON’T Put it On The Sales Floor… A Memoir by Daniel V

Why Do You Write Like This?! It does something to my brain that I can only describe as chaotic and I don’t like it one bit. Is this a young person's style of writing? Like, in the way that everything is abbreviated or the first letter of a sentence is purposefully not capitalized? And the lack of punctuation! It makes no sense.

I’m genuinely concerned that you’re going to develop carpal tunnel syndrome from hitting the ‘shift’ button so often and I don’t even know you. (Though, it occurs to me that if you are a young person this was probably done from your phone, but still!)

As to the subject matter of the review - or what I can gather given my head starts spinning every time I attempt to read it - what you’re describing is annoying. They definitely shouldn’t have something on the shelves that they’re not willing to sell. Pretty basic concept. But, Daniel V, you can’t be so lazy that you need to buy premade Jack-and-Coke’s when you willingly put an uppercase letter at the beginning of 90% of the words you type. It’s a two-ingredient drink (not including ice.) You’re already doing so much more unnecessary work, just make yourself a proper cocktail. You can do it. 

I look forward to reading Went Shopping and Successfully Bought a Handle of Jack Daniels a Two Liter Bottle of Coke and a Bag of Ice and Went Home and Made Myself a Drink and the Vibes Slapped Different… A Follow-up Memoir by Daniel V

One out of five stars because I now have a headache. 

See You Next Tuesday!